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My wolf Delta River

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This is Delta River. But everyone calls her River. She is a strong wolf.
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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Did your little sister get hold of your tablet again? Because that is the only way I can think of you making this monstrosity.

That's not a wolf. That's a blob of eye-burning color that you like to call a wolf.

It would be killed in the wild. I'm okay with you giving it markings but it's fucking GREEN for god's sake. There are ways to make creative patterns without burning out my eye-sockets out. Why does it have a scarf? Why are it's hind-legs broken. I don't see how she can be a strong wolf with all of her legs broken.

Also, you need to learn some basic anatomy. Where the joints are, proportions, how to not make it look like a mangled broken mess, ect.

There are so many flaws I can't even try to write them. I would, however, happily do a red-line for your sorry ass.

TL;DR-
Learn anatomy by looking at references and tutorials, I'll redline, stop burning people's eyeballs.

Also, just a tip, don't save as a .jpg, it gives you these little artifacts. use .png or something else.

-The Big Meanie.